Feedback on Final Version

Performance/lip-syncing
performed really well
good emotion

Relationships between music and visuals
Went really well, clear to see what's going on
Text in some shots, really good
Didn't understand fancy dress
Strong connection between music and lyrics

Camera work
Wide range of shots
Interesting
Shaky shots
Record player, sky etc was good
Good range of shots

Editing

Special Effects

Mise-en-scene, costumes, locations, props